“What is it that you feel you have the need to have 13 ways of looking at?” That was the question posed by Poetry Unbound’s Padraig O’Tuama in a recent post. A question that got me thinking this morning…and also had me rereading Wallace Stevens’ Thirteen Ways of Looking at a Blackbird. My mind went to the beach–a place I spend lots of time for lots of different reasons.
Thirteen Ways of Knowing the Beach
I
I match my breath with the ins and outs of the waves. Salty water molecules swirl around me, seasoning my skin. I fall into perfect sinus rhythm.
II
Seagulls shout. Bossy voices command attention as they probe the shore for handouts and scout out their next heist. Don’t turn your back on the sea or the seagull.
III
Curled toes, deep in the wet and squishy sand. Ankle deep, knee deep, splash! Cool or downright cold. Goosebumps form and squeals of childhood echo. A time machine.
IV
Sun’s out, skin’s out. Memories of baby oil and sunburn mix with realities of skin damage, SPF, and UV index. Trickster sun makes its mark even when hiding behind the clouds.
V
Wind whips and whirls sending sand in sinuous swirls. Waves in white caps wash, breaking barriers, reclaiming all within reach.
VI
Cliffs crumble uncovering geologic stories in layer upon layer, shells on mountain tops where lands rose and sea retreated. History in sediment, conglomerate, sandstone until time, pressure, and heat works its metamorphic magic. Change is constant.
VII
Ospreys hunt, eagle of the sea. Fishing claws grabbing dinner from the deep, no poles or lines. Transported by talons for treetop dining. A creature of sea and sky.
VIII
Squadrons of pelicans in perfect Vs oversee hoards of beachgoers. Gliding on gusts, flapping in formation, surfing the swells, their bellies nearly touching the waves when they rise. Pause and dive. Pouch first approach to prey retrieval. Dramatic drops for seaside lunch.
IX
Artists with rakes trace circles, designs larger than life with perfect symmetry, perfect Pi. Fleeting beauty etched in the sand, hangs in the gallery of your mind’s eye.
X
Tide pools hold secret worlds that live in the in-between. Sometimes completely covered, other times exposed. Life teems under the kelp, sea grass, algae. Sea stars creep on tube-feet, nudibranchs with psychedelic seventies colors strike a pose, pudgy squirting sea cucumbers move only at the sea’s whim. Hermit crabs seek new homes, dwellings abandoned by their former residents.
XI
Snowy egrets with their bright yellow socks stomp the pools at low tide. Lunch counter is open. Neck with an S-curve, stretched out or curled in, dancers in fluid motion.
XII
Beach combing, treasure hunting, shore sweeping. Colored glass roughed and smoothed by the sea, bits and pieces of green, white, amber, sometimes even blue. Sea diamonds. Picking up plastics, multiplying by mitosis, never ending source of damage, destruction. Pollution of our precious life source.
XIII
My playground, location of endless possibility. I walk on water, I walk on clouds. My ears fill with the soothing sounds of whispering waves. I can taste the salt on my lips and feel the release as stress runs down my shoulders and swims out to sea. My heart matches the rhythm of my breath, the rhythm of the sea.


What a beautiful spin on “Thirteen Ways of Looking at a Blackbird.” Your imagery captures the movements of the waves and the birds so well, and I can feel the sand and the spray and the salt on my lips from your descriptions. I am not sure what I could look at in thirteen ways, which gives me something interesting to think about.
I look forward to hearing more about what you come up with. This was a fun piece to write—I know I could have gone on and on. I didn’t even get to sunsets!
Kim, there are so many good images here. Number IV has so many familiar memories from being a kid going to the beach and burning even in the cloudy June mornings. The XII way of knowing the beach starts out beautifully with treasures and polished sea glass. Then the gradual change to the so sad: “Pollution of our precious life source.” Really well written with so many magical phrases like: “metamorphic magic”, “fishing claws” and the pelicans “Gliding on gusts, flapping in formation,”
Thanks Denise. This was a fun one to write. I love when the words pour! It would be interesting to write a series of 13 ways pieces. I’m thinking about other topics worthy of 13 looks!
I grew up in the arid high plains of Eastern Colorado where the only standing water was at the swimming pool. I’ve never had the chance to fall in love with the ocean. But I did, a little bit, through your poem.
Thank you! I try not to take the ocean for granted—which was drive home when our local beaches were closed for a few weeks at the height of the pandemic. I hope you felt the love I have for the beach…it’s a special place.
This is so beautiful! As someone who lives walking distance from the ocean, much of your poem resonated with me–and I also loved the stanzas that didn’t, as they were so vividly described I could tell that we live near different parts of the ocean (maybe even different oceans). I love that you got me thinking about what’s local vs. universal about my beach.Your wordplay is so wonderful. The whole poem was a delight to read.
Now I want to hear about your beach! I do notice that beaches vary—sometimes dramatically from place to place. Thanks for taking time to read!
What a gorgeous love song to the ocean! I love the way that considering 13 things about one thing encourages you to dive deep into nuances and specifics. Your language is so lush here. I can’t pick one favorite part. Gorgeous!
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