Scott’s prompt to write a poem about a minor ailment made finding a subject easy, but figuring out how to make a poem of it was much harder today. And as often happens, I had to find a structure to wrangle my words. I came back to old friend etheree, pushing my thinking into 10 lines.
Irritating Eyes
Chronic dry eye is all about water
overflowing river, ocean waves
water that isn’t wet enough
to soothe scratchy, itchy eyes
tears fall, nose runs, makeup
smears across the face
wet eyes so dry
no relief
in sight
yet
