Jonathan London is probably best known in children’s book circles as the author of the Froggy books, but he has many wonderful books that are varied in content and well written. I mentioned Dream Weaver a couple of days ago as my contribution to the #113texts Mentor Text Challenge. Today I want to tell you a bit about Condor’s Egg by Jonathan London.
Condor’s Egg is a realistic story about a family of California Condors in the wild. As is typical with London, the language is lyrical and carefully chosen. His use of verbs evokes movement and creates a sense of action. And as an added bonus, there is factual information about California Condors at the end of the book as well as a guide to using the book with children.
During the 2012-13 school year, after reading the book as part of our study of birds, we used a number of sentences from this book as mentor sentences for our students to study and then to replicate with their own content.
Here’s one sentence we studied: Circling, he rides the warm air, higher than the tops of the clouds. This is a tricky construction with the main part of the sentence between the parentheses where extra information is often deposited.
T (a second grader) created this sentence–a close approximation: Roaring, they start their engines, then the drivers shoot off the starting line.
J (another second grader) came up with this one: Building, Steve builds a square house, nice and safe!
Here’s one from a first grader (Okay–I know it’s not fair–this is a talented writer!): Running, she goes through the house as fast as she can, trying to get away from the pretend monster.
And here’s one more second grader: Diving, she is determined to catch it, landing on the dusty floor of the canyon.
We used many sentences from this book and explored creating our own sentences following the pattern of London’s sentences. By doing this my students had opportunities to try out new sentence structures, which later showed up in their own writing.
I was thinking about the Jonathan London titles that I use…here’s a few:
- Dream Weaver
- Condor’s Egg
- The Waterfall
- Like Butter on Pancakes
How have you used London’s books? What titles do you like?