Today is the National Day on Writing–a day to celebrate all that writing offers. My students were excited this morning at the thought that they would get to write today. In fact, they were already excited about the writing they had done last night in their Learning at Home notebooks. We started the day listening to a short story by a student about a leaf, a leaf personified, who travels from a tree branch to a construction site and eventually back to a leaf pile with the help of the leaf blower. We could have spent the entire morning listening to stories written by students…but we had writing to do!
Inspired by Red Sings from the Treetops by Joyce Sidman, we began writing our own color-inspired poetry earlier this week. Today we took those bits and starts and worked to craft them into a whole piece. Some students were spectacularly successful, some had moments of brilliance, and others veered away from color and still wrote some interesting accounts of things they are interested in. They wrote, read to a partner, and eventually created a short video of themselves reading their poem on Flipgrid. And while their first attempts are not ready for “prime time,” I am proud of all they accomplished today and their enthusiastic and creative approach to our day.
Here are a few glimpses:
In winter, yellow sighs, I’m done. None of my sunlight can peek through clouds as dark as the oceans’ most shadowy blue places. It’s time white takes his place..
(Third grade boy)
In summer yellow shines from the sky while blue splashes . Colorful plants explode with power and beauty. In summer blue wraps around my ankles. Red rises from green…
(Third grade girl)
In the morning gold wakes me up with his paws and barking, “I’m hungry.” And with his pink tongue, gold wets my face…
(Third grade boy)
At the beach, green is sly. It slithers by surfboards, sneaks by me and ties a slippery knot around my legs…
(Third grade girl)
Students left today wanting more…begging for more opportunities to write and share. My students remind me that writing can be playful and creative, an opportunity for social interaction and experimentation. They remind me that there are lots of reasons #whyiwrite!
I’ve written nothing today so I’ll at least comment in a grammatically correct sentence.
I loved reading these 3rd graders beginnings. Really lovely imagery. Thanks for sharing these young voices!
Thanks Judy! Now to get them to revise and finish… 😉
Lovely poems by students. They have inspired my thinking for my work today. Will they publish— like in a Slides presentation? Awesome!
We’ll definitely publish in class…and maybe more. Stay tuned!
My granddaughter challenged me to the Black/White photo challenge. I upload each to Flickr and Instagram, and I upload another with a saying. Today’s is inspired by your students’ poetry! https://flic.kr/p/ZkH7rA Thank them for me!