It’s hard to top a day like yesterday…at least when it comes to poetry. Today’s schedule was crunched, another minimum day and my last classroom day until after Spring Break. But we still made space for a bit of poetry inspiration. Today I read a few poems from When Green Becomes Tomatoes by Julie Fogliano. Interestingly, she titles each poem in this lovely book by the date she wrote it, taking us through the seasons of the year. We read April 3 (which was eerily a description of a day very much like the one we experienced today…I love this first line: “today the sky was too busy sulking to rain…”), June 15 (a piece about tasting sunshine), and July 10 (the title piece with the refrain “when green becomes tomatoes”). And in a typical 8 and 9 year old fashion, my students, when they turned to their own writing, wrote about their birthdays!
Isla (who happens to share my birthday) was determined that her June 2nd birthday falls in the summer. She wrote this piece inspired by when green becomes tomatoes:
June 2
When summer turns into my birthday
The sky is happy!
life is happy
it is the time to get…
everything I want
(more than sad)
(more than happy)
The best
When leaves are green and light is here
no thunder, no lightening
just…
wind blowing and birds chirping
when summer turns into my birthday
And Leah, who’s birthday falls a bit later in the month, gives a more tentative prediction using “I believe” to frame her poem:
June 23
On June 23rd
I believe it will be cloudy
with a hint of sun.
On June 23rd
I believe it will be hot.
On June 23rd
I believe flowers will bloom.
On June 23rd
I believe it will be my birthday.
I took my poem in a little different direction, thinking about how my three precious grandsons have grown from babies to active, sturdy three year old toddlers in what seems like a blink of an eye. Just where does the time go?
April 3
When babies become toddlers
tiny fingers that used to grab mine
build towers as tall as they are
then topple them with belly laughs
When babies become toddlers
goos and gaas turn into words
that turn into stories
of wonder and adventure
When babies become toddlers
reading becomes play
finding objects, chiming in
anticipating
devouring each word, each page
with minds instead of mouths
When babies become toddlers
those once tiny feet patter
running faster than seems possible
running towards childhood
leaving babyhood behind.
©Douillard
Today
I’ve forgotten
all the things I needed
to remember
and now I can’t find
my calendar to tell me
if it is April or if it is
September
— Kevin
Seems like commentary on the weather lately! I just love the plethora of poetry that happens in April!
Today
Dark, Grey,
And wind’s
Words say:
Not even rain today.
~ Sheri
Love your kids’ poems and how you teach them.