If you know the state of California, you’re aware it is a long state connected by a freeway affectionately called The 5. After hours and hours in the car yesterday, I decided to write a poem…using only one syllable words…in hopes of capturing that long drive up that never-ending ribbon of road. (With a few photos for visual impact–all taken from the passenger side car window.)
Thinking Through My Lens 
I’m so intrigued by your thought to use 1-syllable words to capture that long, long drive. It really works! Well done! Also, I love the contours of the land in that final picture.