It’s April! And it’s the first day of National Poetry Month. I don’t profess to be a great poet–but I am able to share my love of words and poetry with my students–especially when I do the things I ask them to do.
So even though this is not a teaching day for me and even though Spring Break begins tomorrow and I won’t see my students until April 11th, I will write a poem each day. I know that I will be better able to coach and guide them if I am doing the poetry writing I want them to try.
I plan to use Eve Merriam’s Peeling an Orange with them when we get back to school after Spring Break, so why not experiment with it as a mentor text today? One of the techniques I notice in this poem is her use of the contrasting words carelessly and meticulously. So, since photos tend to inspire my writing, I took a peek through my camera roll and spotted this one of a snail from a neighborhood walk earlier this week. And here is the poem it inspired:
Chasing a Snail
Hurrying
all feet and shadow
risking the horrifying crunch
or moving in slowly
my phone a wall
as the telescoping antennae
stretch and reach
each centimeter forward
marked with a telltale spot
of drying slime
like invisible ink
in a race against
time and dryness

Aw I love this!!! Terrifying crunch ! I would cry so hard if I accidentally stepped on one. Snails are so cute and harmless. Your photo captures how cute they are :-). Great poem inspired by the snail and your nice neighborhood walk. 🙂 Enjoy your spring break
Ah, Kim, the snail. Cousin to the slug, my nemesis. Maybe snails are cuter? I like how you juxtapose the snail’s idea of hurrying with the slowness with which it actually moves.
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