Poetry Ecosystem: NPM25 Day 8

Some days it’s the unplanned lessons that have the best results. A few weeks back I came across a picture book that looked interesting. I ordered it, it arrived, and I set it aside. Then yesterday, our first day back after spring break, I found myself with some unclaimed time and reading a book seemed like the perfect solution.

I walked over to the shelf where I stash the books I haven’t gotten to yet…and Together, a Forest: Drawing Connections Between Nature’s Diversity and Our Own called out to me. I started reading the book and those wiggling post-lunch students settled. We learned about different students in the book and their affinity to plants and animals in the forest. There was the student who was interested in everything–and forgetful–just like the squirrel who buried acorns and the ones it forgot later grew into trees.

We started to think about the plants and animals who were like us…and while we didn’t have enough time to finish the book, the seed was planted in the poetry ecosystem that is our classroom.

Today our planned ceramics project went well and we finished successfully before recess. That meant the time I had allowed for the completion of the project after recess was now open and free. So, we went back to Together, a Forest and completed the reading and discussion. And then we started thinking about that question from yesterday…what plant or animal are you like?

The first graders grabbed their notebooks and started to write. They asked the usual questions, “Does it have to be a plant?” (No) “Does it have to be a part of a forest?” (No) “Can I use metaphorical thinking?” (Yes). I wrote–and I made the rounds around the classroom peeking over shoulders, listening to ideas, watching these comparisons turn into small poems, taking root in this poetry ecosystem.

J wrote:

I am an army ant. My super power is strength and I work with people. I eat fruit and I get it at the store then bring it home. My strength is teamwork.

H wrote:

I am an octopus. I am smart. I act like I have eight hands and I am super fast and tricky and change colors.

B wrote:

I am moss. I am like moss because I soak up everything I hear. I remember everything and if it is something bad I can squeeze it out.

And I wrote:

I am an egret. I am quiet and still. Patience is my super power. Most of the time I am good at waiting and thinking. Other times I startle and fly off in a flurry of feathers. I am good at being alone without being lonely. I love to reconnect with my family at the end of the day.

These first drafts will be fodder for the writing we will continue to do, this month and into the future. Right now, my students are writing easily, adding details and elaboration, beginning to play around with language and ideas…and willing and eager to read their writing aloud to their classmates. We have truly built an ecosystem of poetry and writing in our classroom.

3 thoughts on “Poetry Ecosystem: NPM25 Day 8

  1. Debbie Lynn's avatarDebbie Lynn

    I remember a few of my own spontaneous lessons…and those are the best! I love how they grabbed their journals after reading, eager minds ready to write. My littles would not have spit out metaphorical thinking! I’m impressed! …and love their writing-including yours. Now I’m thinking, ‘what animal am I most like?’ πŸ™‚

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  2. Denise Krebs's avatarDenise Krebs

    Ah, Kim, this is lovely. I’m sure it would be fun for each child to say, “I am ____.” It’s such a tangible and accessible lesson everyone can do. I love B’s moss insights: “I remember everything and if it is something bad I can squeeze it out.

    I love the image of the poetry ecosystem built in your classroom. Brava!

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  3. Barb Edler's avatarBarb Edler

    Your classroom sounds engaging and magical. I love the student responses and that one actually asked if they could use metaphorical thinking. Your students are lucky to have you. Keep them writing!!

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