Even though today is technically spring break for me and my students, I found evidence of poetry writing in our Google Classroom. I scheduled a mentor poem for each day this week to inspire and support my young poets–all poems we had studied earlier this school year. Today’s poem was The Blue Between by Kristine O’Connell George.
The steady downpour of rain was another influence evident in my poem and my students’ poems. I’m trying to appreciate the much-needed rain and to find ways to make this week feel like a break. Instead I’m feeling cooped up, without the escape of neighborhood walks. I tried to duck out early this morning, thinking I would beat the rain–just to pull the door open to the skies opening up! I rode that stationary bike…but it’s just not the same for me.
For escape, we took a drive up the coast in the pouring rain. The sight of the stormy ocean was a refreshing change from the walls of the house–even if viewed only through the car window.

My poem:
Raindrops
Raindrops fall
dripping dropping
teardrops
across sky cheeks
Gray on gray
blotting out color
a palette
of monochrome
And yet
precious moisture
dampens fire risk
feeds parched
creeks
ponds
rivers
lakes
reservoirs
Look closely at each
raindrop
and find the hope
reflected
inside
®Douillard
And a student poem by E–also inspired by the rain:
Rain
Everyone hates the rain, sulking in their raincoats,
Hiding themselves under their umbrellas.
I see rain differently,
I see the fun between—
The water to run and splash in
The fun trails to dash across,
Arching up across puddles..
The rain dancing down,
Making gallons of fun,
A river of joy,
Slithering around every house.
In those cloudy days,
I see a different scene.
In those rainy times,
I see the fun between.
And by M (not inspired by rain):
The Gaps Between
Many people see one whole
I see the gaps between
The face standing there
with only one eye.
The pigeon flying by
The trees in a band
The concrete is Atlas
holding up the Stones.
Those rough dark places
I see a different picture
I see the gaps between