Today is Poem in your Pocket day…and I wasn’t in the classroom with my students today! But, they were all prepared. Yesterday they picked one of their own poems (they had quite a selection since they’ve been writing a poem a day since April began), revised it, and copied it on a piece of paper to put in their pocket today. And lucky for me, my teaching partner encouraged students to share their poems…both in the classroom and beyond.
I did collect a few poems yesterday so I would have some to share with you today. Alice wrote a poem about a crummy old nail…maybe inspired by some of the ordinary poems I’ve written and shared.
Crummy Old Nail
Crummy old nail
served many
purposes
Crummy old nail
dented and
bent
Crummy old nail
proud and
historic
Crummy old nail
brave and
cautious
Crummy old nail
old with
wisdom
upon a
shipwrecked mast,
red
like a
cherry covered
in
rust.
Her brother, Luca, also played around with the ordinary–using the still life structure we explored the other day.
Stool: Still Life
That small stool
standing in the corner,
sulking throughout the day.
It’s surprising when someone
comes his way.
He stops sulking and stands up straight
and if he is lucky,
they sit.
When they leave
he straightens up
and waits for others.
When the sun sets,
he stoops and sits
and lets sleep overpower him.
Snoooooooooooooooore!
I’m not sure what inspired Caleb’s poem…he wrote it on the still life day after he tried a still life poem.
Rocket
Getting ready for launch
fueling the tank
cold on the outside
warm on the inside
a big heart driving
not a robot!
5…4…3…2…1…blast off
you jump into the sky
like you’re on a trampoline
from day to night
in a single flight
in the starry sky
time to attend to dreams
And I’m still fooling around with paint chip poetry. I pulled out some in the orange/yellow family today: fresh squeezed, chamomile tea, and yellow brick road. Here’s today’s attempt:
Oz
I follow the yellow brick road
or in my case
the sandy sidewalk
that leads to the Oz I treasure
Blue skies and blue seas
are a canvas
for the fresh squeezed
dabs
dancing in the breeze
I breathe in and exhale
salt air and wildflowers mix to conjure
the soothing comfort
of chamomile tea
I feel it pulse through my veins
Aaaahhhhh!
©Douillard
Enjoyed the poems – crummy old nail
And the stool – awesome –
And by the time I got to this part of the closing poem:
“the fresh squeezed
dabs
dancing in the breeze”
I was all
Filled up
In the way the poetry fills!
Thanks …
Thanks so much for stopping by to fill up on some poetry!
😊
I love that Caleb’s rocket is driven by a heart, not a robot, and is off to “attend to dreams” in the “starry skies”. Then, your wonderful “Oz” brought me the comfort of the sea, and reinforced my simmering desire to visit the ocean today before the rainy onslaught. Well done!
Thanks Molly! There is something special about Caleb’s poem—glad you could point out some of those features. Hope you got to the ocean!