Today we went for it…paint chip poetry, metaphor dice, and Haikubes! Students picked what they wanted, rolled dice, and wrote. Poetry is flowing–some silly, some serious, and some simply beautiful.
There’s something precious about the misconceptions students have about some of the paint chip colors. Wax seals frolic in waves, pearly gates are beautifully adorned entryways, wisdom teeth make you smart, and blizzards create the icebergs that sank the Titanic. But I also love the way they make these words work for them, weaving them into their 8 and 9 year old views of the world.
Here’s a smattering of poems that emerged today.
This is Just to Say
This is just to say
I was eating grapefruit
on the way to the pearly gates
I saw so many sunflowers
across the way
This is just to say
that everything that I saw
inspired me today!
McKay
Outside
the dappled sunlight
is shining so bright
on the dandelions
in the grassland
Leah P.
As you stare at a chalkboard
you move slow
as you see a wax seal
you go closer
it is so detailed
as you start to hear a whale song
you love the slow, loud musical whale song
you keep hearing it
then you see a seal jumping in the waves
it looks like a wax seal.
Brooks
Last night I invited students to write Poetry Is poems. Here is the one Alice wrote:
Poetry
Poetry is like
weaving
threading words
together
to create something
beautiful
When I listen
to poetry
sounds jumps out
sounds as loud as
a bear’s roar
or as soft as the
fluttering
of
a butterfly’s
wings,
all waiting be heard
Poetry can feel
as smooth
as silk
or as gravelly
as loose
cement
Poetry can taste
like sunshine
on a platter of gold
or like
melted stone
in a bowl
of rubber
Poetry can change
Alice
And my own, inspired by a few paint chips (and a cube I forgot to use!):
Poetry is
the sweet pop
of purple joy
pulled from the blackberry bramble
key lime so tart
it puckers your mouth
and makes your saliva run
warm sticky honey
that reminds you
of summer days of youth
the blues
played low and slow
lamenting opportunities lost
hinting at possibilities
yet to come
©Douillard