On day 20 of the poem-a-day challenge, we tackled the list poem. Using Eileen Spinelli’s Creativity as our mentor text, we studied how this list poem was constructed. Students noticed the list of ordinary objects, pointed out the rhyme, saw the punctuation and got ready to create their own lists.
Often, I base my poems on a photo I’ve taken. But today, I decided to write my list poem about poetry…and found myself putting bits of language from my students into it (including that rat from yesterday!). Here’s my first attempt:
Poetry
Poetry
swirls together
sights and sounds
popping like popcorn
then paints on details
like the furry mountain
that was once a rat
you can smell
the tropical sunscreen
slathered on tender skin
and climb the Eiffel Tower
to view the sights
of Paris below
Poetry
links animals and machines
growling and leaping
flowers and candy
sweet, tasty, colorful
blooming in my imagination
quenching my thirst
with cool, fizzy, wetness
that takes my to the seashore
where poetry lives
®Douillard